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December 10th, 2009

Their review of Shock Point ends with this:

"Henry writes with a quick-moving, superficial style and often glosses over awkward plot points with quick explanatory paragraphs. He delivers some shocking moments while making no attempt to examine realistic adolescent problems. A potboiler that may appeal to a wide range of young readers and could be useful for reluctant readers. "

A. I'm a girl.
B. Talk about mixed messages.



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Я очень люблю свою электронную книгу!
Но иногда мне нестерпимо хочется почитать класную обычную - бумажную книжку.
Желательно на хорошей бумаге. С иллюстрациями...
Gizmodo's Joel Johnson, "back on active nerdy," reviews the NatureMill Pro XE Composter. It represents the "miracle of decay at home," he writes, and works very well.

The Witchy Chicks blog, run by Yasmine Ganelorn (who is one of the nicest people online, as well as being a wonderful author of paranormal romance) and nine other writers, kindly allowed me to guest blog.

Here's the first part, come over to their blog to read the rest:

This summer, I had the opportunity to teach several classes on writing to both teenagers and adults. When I started, I felt pretty unsteady. Writing is an odd thing to try and teach -- mostly, I feel, you can talk about your process and you can critique -- but everyone has to find their own method. To me, critique is the best thing that any writer can learn, so I focus a lot on that. The writer who knows how to be a good critiquer will go on to be able to think about their own work differently.

In my own life, I rely a lot on my critique partners. I can send them pieces of things when I get stuck, talk through plot problems when I am frustrated and rely on them to tell me when I'm making sense and when I'm not quite there yet. For that reason, whenever kids ask me for advice about becoming a writer, one of the three things I suggest is that they find themselves a good critique partner. (The other two suggests are fairly straightforward: read absolutely everything they can get their hands on and write a lot).

Giving critique is an important skill, but good critique is only possible where you have good communication, honesty, and trust. Two problems came up a lot this summer among people leery of critique:

1. Some writers felt that there was a lot of discussion of the flaws in a story without any suggestions about how to fix them.

2. Other writers felt that rather than critiquing the story they were trying to create, critiquers wanted to suggest the version of the story that they would have written.
I want to work on HF, my WIP that is in rough first draft form. I'm taking my sweet time. I'm really digging deeper with this WIP, with my characters. I, sometimes, get antsy - wanting to hurry and finish the needed revisions so that I can share with my writing group, and eventually with my agent (who recently asked about it). I worked a bit yesterday - still using the awesome Fire in Fiction by Donald Maass. Let's face it, though, with the upcoming holidays, I'm just not focused enough. I'll grab writing moments when I can, but I think I'll wait till January to truly throw myself back into HF. In the meantime, I'm going to enjoy catching up on my reading. Fell way behind! Right now I'm reading Outside Beauty by Cynthia Kadohata. This is a book C recommended to me. Liking it so far!
Yikes - this just in from PW Daily:

"As part of the sale of its business to business publications, Nielsen Business Media has announced that it is closing its book review publication Kirkus Reviews as well as Editor & Publisher. No details on the closing have been released yet. Nielsen is selling its major publications, including The Hollywood Reporter and Adweek to e5 Global Media Holdings."

David Ng from the Order of the Science Scouts of Exemplary Repute and Above Average Physique sez, "Just a heads up that we have some new science scout badges up, including a number that revolve around programming geekiness, one that focuses on science-y art, and a badge all about science dystopias (with sage advice from an expert in the area no less)."

Increasing the N! (Thanks, David!)



(Boing Boing guestblogger Ned Sublette is a writer, historian, photographer, and singer-songwriter based in New York. Embedded audio in this post: Ned reads an excerpt from chapter one of his latest book, The Year Before The Flood, live at Joe's Pub in New York City. After the jump, the full text of that chapter, republished in entirety here on Boing Boing.)

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New Orleans is a subjective town that demands a point of view. Depending on where you're coming from, you have a different vision of the city. So I felt it was necessary to tell people where I was coming from, so to speak, before I could tell my story of New Orleans.

I'm not from New Orleans, but I lived in Louisiana until I was nine years old--in Natchitoches, Louisiana, which is 282 miles northwest of New Orleans and four years older, the first town the French founded in what later became the Louisiana Purchase. That was back in the bad old days, the 1950s. In August 1960 (just before the desegregation battle erupted in New Orleans) we moved away, to El Paso. I never lived in Louisiana again, until 2004, when I was fifty-three. Returning to Louisiana all those years later, I was a kind of insider / outsider. As I tried to learn the ropes of living in New Orleans, all kinds of long-buried fragmentary memories came surging forward. Like, I already knew what it meant for a deliveryman to leave a package "under the house," because the houses are raised up off the ground. And no one had to explain to me about southern racism, because I went to a segregated school.

The main body of The Year Before The Flood is Part Two, which tells the story of our year in New Orleans. But there's a shorter Part One, a childhood memoir that explains what I was bringing to my New Orleans experience. Here's an excerpt from the first chapter of the book, which is called "Jump Jim Crow." If you want to listen along while you read, here's a clip of me reading it at Joe's Pub on November 20.

THE YEAR BEFORE THE FLOOD: CHAPTER ONE
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Even in slavery days, "white" and "black" children might have personal contact, but in the South of my childhood we were kept as separate as humanly possible. We literally didn't know each other. I lived until I was nine in an approximately half-black town without ever having any social contact with a black kid. I don't mean I didn't have any as close friends. I mean I never had a single conversation with an African American child. As people say when they talk about those days, that was just the way it was. I can remember having it explained to me that no, their color didn't rub off when they touched things.


The polite way of describing southern society in those days is to say that it was segregated. But it is also fair, if less polite, to say that it was a white supremacist society. The program of the Ku Klux Klan had been implemented. African Americans were overtly, legally, literally second-class citizens.


When Mrs. Harrison asked us if we knew why our school would always remain all white, I hazarded a guess. "Because the Negroes have schools of their own?"


"Yes, they do," she replied, "and they're just as good as ours!"


Bullshit, they were just as good as ours.


She probably believed it. A lot of white people lived in fantasyland. But the push to integrate schools didn't come because black people loved being around white people so much that they wanted to come hang out with them. It was because if there were two separate school systems, the black one would get less of every resource. In 1950, "colored" 1 schools in Shreveport had no electricity, and the students used outhouses.


Which is not to say that no educating took place; African Americans who came up in that system remember heroic teachers. Jerome Smith, born in New Orleans in 1939, told me: "We had the worst books that you can imagine, but we had such dedicated educators that it gave us a kind of readiness... We didn't recognize that [at the time], but in the years that followed, we had a foundation." Not everyone was so lucky, and the deck was stacked against African American children getting an education. Overcrowding was the norm for their schools; the Macarty school in New Orleans's Ninth Ward had 2,536 children in a building designed for 1,200. No wonder Fats Domino dropped out of that school in the fourth grade.


No, Mrs. Harrison explained, the reason Northwestern Elementary would always remain white was that the nuns who deeded it to the state had included that as one of the conditions.


Well, that settled it. The deal had been cut long before we were born.


Our white-forever school was a lovely place. Located on the campus of Northwestern State College, where my dad taught, it had expansive, handsome grounds, with a long, sloping hill that led down toward Lake Chaplin, and big airy classrooms with a piano in every one.


We were raised with the southern ideal of the innocent, indolent child. With its pretensions to aristocracy and perhaps a French aversion to exercise, Louisiana was never big on making kids do calisthenics, so for physical education we played Drop the Handkerchief and singing games. I was what was later called hyperactive--I always had a rhythm, or a rhyme, or a song going on--and visibly bored. The class seemed to work on the alphabet all through the first grade.


My parents, being teachers, had taught me to read and do arithmetic at home, so I was considered a gifted child when I started school. This was surely, presumed my biologist parents, the result of good genes, though I think it was more the amount of attention and care they gave me. It was the era of IQ tests, and I was given batteries of them. When I was seven, in some kind of educational experiment that my parents must have had a hand in promoting, I was placed five grades ahead of my level, into a seventh-grade class, for two weeks. I found I could handle the academics pretty well, not because I was a genius but because they weren't that tough. Socially, however, I wasn't prepared to be in a roomful of seventh-graders all day.


That was the year Attack of the 50 Foot Woman came out--where is this kind of inspiration today, when our cinema needs it?--and I felt myself surrounded by fifty-foot women. There's nothing as mysterious to a seven-year-old boy as a passel of twelve-year-old girls. To further heighten the eroticism of the experience, they had portable transistor radios, and could summon up rock 'n' roll at recess. I could read better than they could, but so what? They had something else going on.


One of my enduring memories of Natchitoches dates from that surreal stint among the giants and giantesses of the seventh grade. The social studies class was instructed to break up into groups and write, and act out, scenes that were to dramatize . . .
A slave auction.


They had us play slave auction in social studies class.


I'm not sure what the purpose of that exercise was. But what it demonstrated for me was that some people lived between the piety of knowing that slavery was bad and the desire of living it once again. It proved something I already knew, even at that age: the white South loved to reminisce about slavery days.


Since I wasn't a bona fide seventh-grader, I was an auditor for this event, not a participant. No one interpreted the slave roles. No one would have wanted to. The slaves were imaginary. One kid, playing the role of an auctioneer, read haltingly from the script he had laboriously written himself:


"I. Don't. Like. To. Break. Up. These. Families," he read.


"But. What. Can. I. Do?


"It's. My. Job."

(c) 2009 Ned Sublette



I'm almost too thrilled for words. Kirkus Reviews, that badly written, badly edited snark fest of anonymous and cowardly scribbling is finally going to be put out of our misery. I hear the remaining subscriptions will be fulfilled with Easy Rider.
The cold California sun is streaming through the window. I have 58 pounds of portfolios to read from UAB students, and I managed to read a chunk of them on the plane. That was the weight of one of the suitcases with the majority of stories. Grades are due on Tuesday, so this weekend will be holed up reading and reading some more.

Barbara O'Connor
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has posted two wonderful blogs about our adventures in Readers Theatre in Searcy, Arkansas at Harding College last weekend. I loved every minute of it, and it was so much fun performing all of our stories. I'll be posting pictures here soon.

Norah is playing Scrooge in the holiday show, and so we're gathering props of nightgowns, scarves, skirts, nightcaps etc...Lucy gets a home a week from Friday, and Flannery gets home sometime next week.

What else? I want to remember some of the more memorable moments this fall and odd/interesting aspects of Birmingham life.

Birmingham and fall...in no particular order

Gay Bingo to raise money for AIDS Awareness and Outreach...It's a blast and last week was a Dolly Parton Christmas Gay Bingo night.
The tolling bells of Our Lady of Sorrows every hour on the hour...
Cora, the most lovely neighbor, whose heart just shines so gently with love and kindness...
A student who is the son of the first Pita Bread Man in North Alabama...
The Chinese lady at the laundromat who is a San Francisco transplant...she will not take a tip. Ever.
Learning to play the dulcimer...hoping to buy one in January.
The student who said, "In Georgia, we just don't talk about Civil Rights. Not like here."
Chez Lu Lu...a wonderful French restaurant with a fainting couch in the ladies room and tons of murals...
New York Pizza in Homewood...
Walking through Homewood on Halloween with kids everywhere and luminaries lighting the streets...
The gold-raspberry leaves of fall...
A beautiful student production of Eurydice...how I wanted Norah to see it...
Students at Epic School near UAB and my students reading new stories to them...
Stories and more stories...so many more to remember...this is just the tip of the iceberg.

Time to write Jack...and then time to read...

Snow day

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Originally published at erin-go-blog!. You can comment here or there.

I probably shouldn’t be enjoying a snow day, given how much work I have to do/how much I need to accomplish with my students before Christmas break….but yeah, sometimes teachers want to sleep in, too. ;)

Somewhere along the line, oatmeal became my breakfast of choice. When I don’t have to work, I VERY much prefer being able to make real oats (as opposed to “quick” oats, which is what I have when I have to get to work). In the summer, when peaches were in season, I was cutting up a peach and drizzling it with honey to have mixed in to my oatmeal. My fall treat is dicing up an apple, cooking with a splash of apple cider added to the water (along with cinnamon and nutmeg) and sweetening with a mix of brown sugar and Splenda. Yum.

I had a shoe tragedy yesterday…my go-to pair of brown loafers (pictured below) has a HUGE crack in the sole. Which I realized when I stepped outside and my foot got wet.

I’ve had them for a few years, and I wore them ALL the time. I bought them at JC Penney, because on sale/with coupon, they are much cheaper than the $75 price tag at the website. So I called JC Penney yesterday, and of course they no longer carry these in-store. I was able to order them from the JC Penney website, but of course this shoe was out of stock. So I got this one instead:

(I do also have a pair of these that I can’t wear anymore, because the lining has worn off the heel area and it was putting holes in the heels of my socks…) So that’s good, but I still want the other ones, too.

Anyway.

I’m having a hard time deciding what to do with my day…be lazy, or be productive? I should probably get some grading done. Maybe read for a bit. We don’t have a tree yet, but maybe I could get some of the other decorations up. Clean? Put on pants and venture out into the world? Sigh…I just DON’T KNOW!

I think I’ll start by emptying the dishwasher. I’ll let you know how it goes. Happy snow day!

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Aside from the piece about Victoria Principal paying to be shot into space (she bought a ticket on the first commercial flight into space from the Virgin Atlantic guy, Branson), and several items about our ongoing National Embarrassment, Sarah Palin (loved the one about her not allowing any foreign reporters to ask her questions), this is my favorite web discovery, brought to my attention by Robert N. Lee. The poems of Ms. Suzanne Somers from her book, Touch Me. There are three poems here, and if you don't have the time to listen to all three, I recommend you skip ahead to the 2:49 mark and listen to the very short piece that follow (especially you, Lisa G) entitled "Extra Love". The last poem, "The Quiet Loneliness of Being Alone," is also quite moving. For a full sampling of the poet's range and linguistic mastery, listen to all three.



I caught Michael Haneke's new movie in a theater yesterday, The White Ribbon. and was most impressed, though I had not liked it much on DVD--i must have been in a crummy mood. Shot in gorgeous black and white, narrated at a remote distance in time by a schooteacher, it tells of events that rock a small German village in the years before the first World War.

These events begin with a riding accident--the local doctor and his horse are brought down by a hidden tripwire that no one knows who placed there. Then a sawmill worker dies and the dead woman's son, holding responsible the Baron who lords it over the village, chops down a portion of the Baron's cabbage field. That same day the Baron's young son is beaten. The farmer whose son chopped up the cabbage field takes his own life, etc, etc. It becomes obvious that someone is punishing the village. And it merits some punishment. Most of the children seem to be abused by contemporary standards. Particularly bad is the condition of the pastor's kids who are caned regularly--he believes this will keep them innocent. The movie is filled with grave, thin-faced children who turn up at the scene of every tragedy. These are the same children who will grow up to embrace the ideas of the National Socialists. Against this wickedness and cruelty is posed the sweetness of a romance between the schoolteacher and governess of the Baron's children, a sunny color in Haneke's somber palette. It all has something of a fabulist air, a bleak fairy tale. Worth checking out.

Here's Michael Madsen sorta reading more celeb poetry. His tone is different than that of Somers, besides which he may well be half in the bag,

Just saw this on PW: "As part of the sale of its business to business publications, Nielsen Business Media has announced that it is closing its book review publication Kirkus Reviews as well as Editor & Publisher. No details on the closing have been released yet. Nielsen is selling its major publications, including The Hollywood Reporter and Adweek to e5 Global Media Holdings."

The tone of Kirkus was often mean, but I still have mixed feelings about seeing a publication go down. And I took any book with a star from Kirkus extra seriously, given their normally crabby-pants reviews.

[And if you read [info]davidlubar's blog, you'll know why I singled him out.]



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I started the week asking us to define our own true emotional arcs, the stories that live deeply and that we can’t avoid telling.

But I didn’t actually get around to saying how to do that. I just went on to talk about how to write to the arc, which is maybe difficult if you don’t know what the arc is.

That’s the thing. The arc can and probably will change with each project you do. In fact, every story has its own emotional arcs – the big picture, and one for each scene.

I do, however, want to get back to the idea that these arcs live deeply within us, and that something might be gained from analyzing the curve of our most natural arcs.

That, maybe, knowing the sort of plot points that correspond to your arc can help you through those paths that you follow blindly when you quiet your mind to write, as Anne Lamott suggests. That looking at the emotional arcs you’ve created in the past might help guide you in the future, and provide emotional correspondants to plot markers that you can work toward.

My arc almost always starts with a general sense of unease, unhappiness, disgruntlement. Now that I realize that, I can ask myself, “Who is this character? What is making her feel uneasy? What’s her particular situation?”

My arc continues to a place where the character decides to change her situation. Having answered questions about who she is, I can decide what she might do to make herself happier.

The character will follow her own plot arc, while I continue to explore my deep-setemotional arc. We'll keep going on like that until we've had a satisfying journey, both plot-wise and emotion-wise.

Each character I write will have different specifics, some might have more serious issues than others, but now I know the general sketch of the story I’m most driven to tell, and that is what makes me the perfect person to tell this story. It lives inside me.

Have you discovered the emotional arc that lives inside you?
Maggie S. just had a great post about why she sets goals.
Meg Cabot just had this great post about putting on your big girl panties and dealing with things.
Lisa just had this post of awesome about how you should follow your bliss.

Which made me think. Note: Me thinking is somewhat dangerous. But it made me think about what I want out of life and I realized that I have no idea what my bliss is or how to follow

Yes, I am blissless!

I mean, I am not like Eeyore and looking sad and finding negatives everywhere.
Eeyore: I can't believe you used me as an example.
Me: Sorry Eeyore.


I am a pretty happy person actually, but I have never consciously thought to myself: SET GOALS. FOLLOW YOUR BLISS. PUT ON YOUR BIG GIRL UNDERWEAR.

Does anyone else not like the word 'panties?' I really don't like that word. Especially when men over 72 say it.

Anyway, I just sort of live and not worry about bliss and it's worked for me.

But now I want to have some bliss to follow. Not a Tiger Woods kind of bliss where I eschew all responsibility and just sort of follow my libido to the land of porn stars and cocktail waiters, because... um... EW!

And I have to wonder... Am I the only one out there who doesn't know exactly what her bliss is? I sort of just find bliss all the time, in random things like Tala rolling in the snow...
Tala: Hey! This isn't a snow picture.
Me: You blend in with the snow in all the snow pictures.
Tala: True.
I will give you that one and add that my bliss is basically these things: squirrels, cats, squirrels, Lover Boy (my doggy boyfriend), when chicken falls on the floor, car rides, belly rubs, squirrels

Sorry for the Tala digression.

But I find my little bliss moments with her or the cat humiliating herself by not being able to jump up on the table...

Lyra the Cat: I am going to sleep and pretend you did not mention that event, which should never not be mentioned, Human!

Or getting to touch my first hardcover copy of CAPTIVATE, which came in the mail yesterday...
Yes, this is a plug for my book. It was so cool to actually hold it in my hands for the first time. I almost passed out.

But maybe finding little bliss all the time isn't how I should be. Maybe I should working for a big bliss, a followable bliss.
Do you all have a bliss?
Is it silly even to ponder this?
Should I just put on my big girl underwear and move on?

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Creative Journaling: playing it forward

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In a couple of previous entries, I mentioned the ways in which Creative Journaling gives me yet another excuse to play helps inform and inspire my writing efforts. (If you missed those entries, you can access them here and here.)

I'm not the only one, of course. Earlier this week, author R L. LaFevers wrote a related entry for the Shrinking Violets' blog. Here's an excerpt of "Envisioning the Coming Year" (reposted with permission):

No lesser authority than Carl Jung has claimed that our best work originates in play.

The dynamic principle of fantasy is play, which belongs also to the child, and as such it appears to be inconsistent with the principle of serious work. But without this playing with fantasy no creative work has ever yet come to birth. – Carl Jung

Now before you roll your eyes and think you left all that back in grade school, let me gently point out that collages and vision boards are a highly effective tool in helping focus your creative energies—either in a personal direction or in a project-related one.

There are a couple of different ways to approach a vision board. You can create one that focuses on:

Personal growth aspirations for the coming year
Professional goals
Creative goals
Spiritual areas you’d like to work on.
Qualities you’d like to more fully embrace or invite into your life
Whatever whispers to you, that’s what you should use for the focus of the board.

But perhaps you’re more comfortable working on something to do with your work-in-progress, and that’s fine, too. Some story collages capture the overall mood and feel of the book.

They can also be representative of certain scenes or parts of the book, maybe even parts you're having a hard time nailing down. When you work on a collage, you let your subconscious take over and then, watch out!

We’d LOVE to see some of the vision boards and collages you create! If you get motivated over the next few weeks (even after the holidays) please do send us a jpeg of your collage/vision board and we’ll feature them here on the blog. (We can absolutely share them anonymously!) And while sharing your project is definitely not required, we might even have a prize drawing for all of those who participate. If you'd like to share, send your jpeg to us here at Shrinking Violets, and we'll do the rest.

So there you have it: an invitation (with incentives!) to try it on for size.

I think I might adapt the idea of a vision board, maybe glue the images into the pages of my sketchbook instead of creating something poster-sized. The possibilities are endless--form and function, entirely up to me. Smile


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I'm about to dip my toe into the workshop experience. No telling if anyone will sign up yet, but I and my sponsor, the Providence Public Library, have hopes!

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Seeing as there is only a toenail of 2009 left, I think it's about time for me to post the twelve best books I read in 2009 (not all were published in '09). My complete reviews of all these guys are on my Goodreads page, where I post all my absolute favorites after I finish them. In my head, my LJ friends will all be incredibly inspired after reading this post to go out and post their top twelve on their blogs as well, until we have a giant pile of booklove going on, but there are many incredible things in my head, so this may or may not happen.

I've given my little pull quotes from my reviews, and also a bit about the book, and who I would give it to since Christmas is here . . .

Without further ado:

1. PEACE LIKE A RIVER, by Leif Enger.

It is: A beautifully written Western (don't be frightened off) with gorgeously written sibling relationships and a hint of spirituality. About a teen who shoots two intruders and goes on the run from the law.

I'd give it to: A hard to shop for guy, because it is not frilly. My mother-in-law. Because it jives with Christianity without being in a "Christian" book. My father, because he reads a lot of thrillers and this will be just slightly off the beaten path for him.

Choice quote from my review: "I have bought [this novel] three times while traveling for my own novel, and given away twice before I could get it home with me. It's just that kind of book, where you want to go "oh man, take this." "




2. MAGIC UNDER GLASS, by Jaclyn Dolamore.

It is: A whimsical YA historical fantasy about a girl who discovers a man's soul trapped in an automaton.

I'd give it to: Fans of HOWL'S MOVING CASTLE. Teens with short attention spans. Lovers of good historical fantasy and whimsy. Teens who aren't into fantasy. Teens who are into Jane Austen.

Choice quote from my review: "The result is a whimsical, smart novel that is sort of like a cross between Howl’s Moving Castle and Jonathan Strange and Mister Norrell. The details are lovely, the voice consistent, the characters complex."


3. LOVE IS THE HIGHER LAW, by David Levithan.

It is: The dreaded 9/11 novel, without being dreadful. The story of 9/11 written as only a New Yorker could write it.

I'd give it to: Anyone. Every teen who I could convince to read it. Every adult I could convince to read it.

Choice quote from my review: "And it was not a sad book. Incredibly, it was everything that 9/11 was not. Though as a writer I saw a ton of things that I would’ve changed about the book, all I could think after I closed the pages was what a buoyant mood I was in. I was filled with faith in the ultimate good of people in the face of horror, and I, like the main characters, felt like I wanted to talk about where I was that day, how I felt, what changed.

I did. That night, I curled up with my husband in bed, lights off, and together we whispered back and forth what we remembered about 9/11."




4. HOW TO SAY GOODBYE IN ROBOT, by Natalie Sandiford.

It is: A coming of age story about two teens who "meet" nightly on a quirky late-night radio show.

I'd give it to: Reluctant readers, with the line: "do you like weird comedy movies? Read this." Also: "Ignore the pink cover, it has nothing to do with anything."

Choice quote from my review: "The quirky and sincere and bizarre and fascinating callers enchant both the narrator and the reader, and ultimately, this book ended up on my five star list because the show and the ending remained in my head for longer than it took me to read the book."



5. STITCHES, by David Small.

It is: A graphic novel memoir with such stunning, tiny moments of characterization that I caught my breath.

I'd give it to: Pretty much anyone over the age of 13. It is a fast read -- an hour -- and the illustrations mean that seldom-readers easily get into it.

Choice quote from my review: "I will tell you this: David Small shines in illustrating the small details that make people real. This is a fairly dark book, but there were parts were I laughed out loud at Small's cunning characterizations. If you read other reviews, you'll see they call the style "cinematic" and "stunning" and it's both of those things. It's also whimsical, sad, and ultimately uplifting. It has possibly the best final line of any book I've read."



6. BONES OF FAERIE, by Janni Lee Simmer.

It is: A creepy, moody faerie story that would have positively delighted me as a teen.

I'd give it to: 10-15 year old lovers of fantasy, faeries, or sci-fi.

Choice quote from my review: "16 year old faerie-crazy Maggie would've died of happiness reading this book. I think Jannie Lee Simmer absolutely nailed her readership with this YA, and it's been a long time since I've read a YA and felt that. The details of this book really shine: the dangerous plants, the loss of black-and-white, good-and-evil that comes with growing up, and the subtle differences that resulted from the war with Faerie."



7. MARCELO IN THE REAL WORLD, by Francisco X. Stork

It is: A novel about a high-functioning autistic teen being forced to work in his father's law firm and join the "real world." A stunning, quiet novel where the fear is that the narrator will lose his innocence.

I'd give it to: Introverts. Teens who don't fit in. Any of the creative types in your life. Your mom. It's a very spiritual book -- not a religious, spiritual -- and it's very universal without being generic.

Choice quote from my review: "I found Marcelo a perfectly wonderful narrator -- kind, principled, and very, very honest with both the reader and with others. Watching him "grow up" in the cutthroat atmosphere of the law office was at once heart breaking and satisfying."

8. TALES FROM OUTER SUBURBIA, by Shaun Tan

It is: A collection of short stories and graphic stories illustrated by the incredibly talented Shaun Tan. All reflecting on normalcy, strangeness, and belonging.

I'd give it to: Anyone. No, really, anyone.

Choice quote from my review: "From a short story that remarks on the taciturn, wise water buffalo who lives down the street (who is really a water buffalo) to a story about beautiful ancient worlds hidden inside suburban homes, the collection explores the idea of what we give up in a modern world. My favorite story, the bittersweet "Stick Figures," embodies the entire book: stick figures with tumbleweed heads stand in for the bits of wildness that still manage to creep into our sterile suburbs."



9. JELLICOE ROAD, by Melina Marchetta

It is: A complicated YA novel that seems to be about teen territory wars in Australia and really isn't. It's more of a boarding school coming of age story about broken teens, with beautiful characterization.

I'd give it to: Fans of YA. Dedicated readers, because this book is difficult for the first 125 pages.

Choice quote from my review: "I think quite possibly my absolute favorite thing that Marchetta does is the character reversal. She introduces a character which we view in a terrible light because the main character views them in a terrible light, and then she completely changes our mind about them in a subtle and realistic way throughout the book until finally we and the main character are in love."



10. THE SECRET LIFE OF BEES, by Sue Monk Kidd.

It is: The story of a white girl who lives with a family of incredibly powerful black women in the 1960s.

I'd give it to: People who think they don't like historical coming-of-age. Book clubs. People who like to talk about books after they're done reading them.

Choice quote from my review: "While this book isn't perfect, I was completely enchanted by the writing, the pacing, and the careful observation. As a Virginian well-versed in humid Southern summers and Southern cooking, I thought Kidd did a fantastic job of evoking that feeling of sweat trickling slowly between your boobs. "




11. YEAR OF WONDERS, by Geraldine Brooks.

It is: A book about the plague, as told by Anna Frith, a maid to the rector and his delicate wife. It's neither gruesome nor desperately sad.

I'd give it to: The folks who I'd just given THE SECRET LIFE OF BEES to,

Choice quote from my review: "What do I love about this book? I love that Geraldine Brooks plays with language and gives lovely wordplay that delights the writer in me, and I love that she is unerring and subtle in her deft characterization. "



12. FEED, by M. T. Anderson

It is: Technically I'm cheating including this one, as it's a reread, but it was just as brutal the next time around. It's a brutal, merciless YA about a future where everyone has a "feed" installed in their heads -- basically the internet never shuts off and is linked with our consciousness. The moral is cutting, hard, and very, very long-lasting.

I'd give it to: Everyone should read this book. Everyone. It's the BRAVE NEW WORLD for our generation. I stuff this into the hands of as many teens as I can (usually wrenching their Blackberries away before I do).

Choice quote from my review: " This, in my opinion, is the best written YA book I've ever read. The characterization is brilliant and unflinching, the details of the world absolutely spot-on, and the YA coming-of-age plot seamlessly worked into a brutal sci-fi story."


I really would like to shout out to the picture books my kids have been loving this year, too, but this post is already epic . . . they're on my Goodreads page . . .

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wereallmad.jpg joeth.jpg Eleven signed East Totem West posters by psychedelic artist Joe McHugh from the late 1960s are up for auction on eBay as a set. His famed "White Rabbit" poster (detail shown inset) is included. This image was the cover for the book "The White Rabbit and Other Delights." The book documented the East Totem West "hippie business" McHugh founded which produced many iconic, psychoactively-inspired works of poster art during its brief existence. As BB reader scifijazznik says in the comments, the posters make you "wanna take the elevator to the 13th floor (which is eight miles high) and have [your] 19th nervous breakdown while writing the 23rd strawberry letter, which is basically 10,000 words in a cardbord box, man." In closing: duuuuude.



In my latest Publishers Weekly column, I explain why I'm not even going to try to sell downloads of the audiobook of the my forthcoming experimental short story collection, With a Little Help: Apple won't carry it without DRM; Audible won't carry it without an abusive EULA; and all the major digital delivery systems are crufty and needlessly complicated.
For my next book, Makers, we tried again. This time Audible agreed to carry the title without DRM. Hooray! Except now there was a new problem: Apple refused to allow DRM-free audiobooks in the Apple Store--yes, the same Apple that claims to hate DRM. Okay, we thought, we'll just sell direct through Audible, at least it's a relatively painless download process, right? Not quite. It turns out that buying an audiobook from Audible requires a long end-user license agreement (EULA) that bars users from moving their Audible books to any unauthorized device or converting them to other formats. Instead of DRM, they accomplish the lock-in with a contract.

I came up with what I thought was an elegant solution: a benediction to the audio file: "Random House Audio and Cory Doctorow, the copyright holders to this recording, grant you permission to use this book in any way consistent with your nation's copyright laws." This is a good EULA, I thought, as it stands up for every word of copyright law. Random House was game, too. Audible wasn't. So we decided not to sell through Audible, which I was intensely bummed about, because I really like Audible. They have great selection, good prices, and they're kicking ass with audiobooks.

With a Little Help: Can You Hear Me Now?

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So here's a classic dilemma for me: I need to do an interview with somebody for a story I'm writing. It has to be in-person. It's in a place where lugging around my laptop and typing while the the person speaks isn't particularly feasible. And I won't have time post-interview/pre-deadline to go through a recording and transcribe the necessary notes 'n' quotes.

And here's a solution: Livescribe's Pulse Smartpen, a nifty piece of technology that can record audio every bit as well as my old voice recorder, while simultaneously making a digital copy of my handwritten notes and linking both notes and audio into a seamless whole.

I saw the Pulse for the first time last May at Maker Faire and promptly spent several months dithering about whether or not it was going to break my heart. I bought one last month, to help me keep track of research and interviews for a book I'm writing, and I'm happy to report that the Pulse lives up to my expectations. Granted, it's expensive and not particularly useful for everybody. But if you do a lot of note-taking (writers, journalists, college students, researchers... I'm looking at you), I think it's worth the investment. Here's why...

First off, let's talk money. I always hate it when tech reviews dangle something awesome in front of me and then spring the price tag at the end. This being my first tech review ever, I'm going to take the opportunity to switch things up. The Pulse Pens work with Mac or PC. There's a 2 Gb model for $169 and a 4 Gb version for $199. Both come with a couple of ink cartridges, a USB charger, and a small starter notebook. This is, however, not the end of your financial dealings with Livescribe. Ink cartridges will have to be replaced. Each fine point tip is supposed to last through about 56 pages of writing and replacements are $6 for a 5-pack. You'll also need special paper to use the Pen. A 4-pack of single-subject, college-ruled notebooks is $20, and there are lots of other notebook options, including Moleskin lookalikes. You can, however, also print pages of the stuff, for free, from any PC with a Color LaserJet Printer that is Adobe PostScript compatible and can print at 600dpi or higher.

Now, the fun. That special paper is important because it's covered with tiny dots that create a positioning system for the infrared camera in the Pen. The camera turns on when the Pen's tip is pressed into the paper, and turns off again when the tip is lifted. It's not really recording what you write, so much as it's recording the position of pen tip, on a coordinate plane formed by the dots.

I figured that out when the first Pen I got malfunctioned. Instead of turning off when I lifted the Pen away from the page, the camera would just stay on continuously. What I wrote on the physical page looked normal. But when I uploaded the digitized writing to my computer, I got not clean handwriting, but a crazy scrawl with a line recorded for everywhere the pen moved—whether on the paper or through the air above it. And that was how I learned Livescribe has great customer service. I called their phone line, the lady who answered was able to quickly figure out what was wrong, and she immediately got me a replacement in the mail. There was absolutely no hassle. Good stuff.

The replacement pen works perfectly. What I write on the physical page is recorded and looks great. I can use it without audio to make a digital (i.e., less lose-able) copy of my notes. If I want to record audio and writing at the same time, I use the control "buttons" that are printed at the bottom of every page of the dot paper—I just tap the space printed, "record", and tap "stop" when I'm done. To replay the audio, I tap the pen on the text I've written. I probably don't need to point out how incredibly useful this could be for note-taking during interviews, lectures, or even just keeping better track of your own thoughts and observations while you work. Plus, if you want, you can share your recorded audio and notes either with select friends, or the public, via a "Pencast". Observe:

So yeah, it's pretty sweet. The printed pseudo-buttons also allow you to set and jump between audio bookmarks, jump to a position in a recording, adjust playback speed, Pen volume, and set other Pen controls. There's also a calculator. Yeah. It's printed on the inside cover of the notebooks and you just tap the "keys" with the pen to make it work.

Another neat application: The piano. Choose this setting and the Pen will prompt you to draw eight boxes on the dot paper. Each box then becomes a note in the scale, which you can play by tapping it with the Pen. This is how you amaze your friends and make yourself feel better about not owning a smart phone. In my experience. Speaking of which, the Pen also has an online ap store, where you can pick up free and paid games, reference tools, a unit converter, a Spanish dictionary, and even a tool to teach yourself Hebrew chanting. Seriously. Right now, there's only a handful of applications. But I'm really looking forward to seeing how this grows in the future.

Bottom line: This thing does what it says it does, and does it well. If you're in school, or you have the right sort of job, the Livescribe Pulse Pen could really make your life easier. Someone also mentioned to me on Twitter that the Pen could be useful for people with memory problems, and I think it could work for that as well—provided the memory problems weren't so severe that you couldn't remember how to use the Pen. If none of this applies to you, though, the Pen is really just a nifty toy and probably not worth the cost of ownership. That said, you should still find a friend that does need it and get them to let you play with it a bit. Because it's really, really fun.



An upcoming round of negotiations for the Anti Counterfeiting Trade Agreement (ACTA, the notorious, punishing secret copyright treaty) is schedulef for New Zealand in April 2010. Under the terms of the treaty, New Zealand could be forced into accepting the "three strikes" rule that was defeated after a lengthy parliamentary battle last year ("three strikes" means that if someone you live with gets three unsubstantiated accusations of copyright infringement, you and everyone you live with loses access to the Internet and it becomes a crime for any other ISP to hook you back up again).

The opposition movement that formed in response to the "three strikes" rule is ready to take action on ACTA, to make sure that New Zealand's information policy is made democratically, and not through secret meetings in back rooms. They are organizing their response to the ACTA negotiations next April, and given their amazing mobilization against "three strikes" the last time around, I expect great things. If you're from .nz or live there now, tell your friends and loved ones about this: your family's ability to communicate, earn a living, get an education and participate in civil society could be jeapordized by the decisions the elite plan on making in your country.

And hey, Mexico! There's an ACTA meeting headed your way in January. Got anything planned?

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nobyhouse.jpg Assassin's Creed 2, The Beatles: Rock Band, Borderlands, Brutal Legend, Dragon Age: Origins, Grand Theft Auto: Chinatown Wars, Left 4 Dead 2, Modern Warfare 2, New Super Mario Bros. Wii. There, are we done? For the majority of top 10 of 2009 lists spreading fungally across every site covering games, probably, and they're not at all particularly wrong. But 2009 was about a lot more than that handful that we knew would top their respective Metacritic charts (and retail sales lists) six to nine months before their release date, and -- as I did with last year's Offworld 20 list (with a near-identical intro, I've just re-discovered, woops!) -- this list for Boing Boing will instead focus on the games that left their own strong mark on the year, just, sadly, a mark that in most cases went mostly overlooked. Split into two sections, the first part of the Boing Boing 20 list will focus on console and handheld releases, while next week's will round up the ten best indie and iPhone games, organized alphabetically rather than by any arbitrary ranking, with plenty of room in the comments for your own additions to your top gaming moments of the year. Without further ado, then, the best collection of pre-adolescent royalty, retro revivalism, at least two kinds of rhythm, stretchers, scribblers, and succulents the year had to offer, and one bona-fide blockbuster that managed to rise above the rest (it's the one not listed above, can you guess before you reach the end?):

Little King's Story [Marvelous, Wii]

Little King's Story was a true left field surprise this year: a game about managing a township unwittingly put under your control, about protecting them and conquering the things they fear, a game about expanding your reign through exploration and field conquests, and a game that managed to do a better job of the mini-micro-management of your troops than even Nintendo's re-released Wii-control Pikmin that must have inspired it.

Its crayon and pastel fantasy surely didn't help curry any favor with the gaming hardcore, which is a shame mostly because it a.) belies the surprisingly challenging and strategic game underneath and 2.) be honest, lends the game an undeniable storybook charm. Truly one of the year's best adventures that too few have played.

Might & Magic: Clash of Heroes [Capy, DS]

Coming in as the year's best 11th-hour surprise, Toronto indie Capy's puzzle/strategy/RPG take on the Might & Magic universe was just covered here on Boing Boing, so I'll reiterate that here:

Like Puzzle Quest -- Infinite Interactive's similarly dangerously time-devouring puzzler -- before it, Clash overlays its fantasy RPG tale with battles that play out via color-matching vertical lines of troops to create, fuse and link attacks launched against your enemies, and doing the same horizontally to put together defensive lines to guard against theirs.

Its ruleset is so intricately devised and delicately balanced that it'd take an article in itself to explain them fully, but for all its richness and complexity, it's a system that takes only minutes of practice to mentally snap together, and all your remaining hours of the day to happily master. If you have any proclivity toward brainy puzzling, do not hesitate to pick this up: it's got all the trappings of being one of the handheld's underdog classics.

Noby Noby Boy [Namco, PS3]

Those that said that Noby Noby Boy -- the Katamari Damacy follow-up from creator Keita Takahashi -- had no point themselves missed the point. While it's true that the design of each individual play session is as lackadaisical and boundless as the BOY himself, its overarching goal is an achievement in itself as gaming's most massive massively-multiplayer undertaking.

Underneath the surface is a story of, ideally, countless BOYs (as of this writing we're just ten players shy of 100,000) all vying to impress the universe's only GIRL by doing the only thing they were put on Earth to do: swallow and stretch their coiled bodies as far as they can. By converting those impressive and hard-earned meters into the love that propels her own body further into the solar system, in real-time, she unlocks the planets she reaches for all the players in the world.

So, yes, there is a goal, and there is an end-game, which we'll only see if and when our PlayStation 3s (or, very soon, iPhones) are still functioning in the time it takes to push her the remaining ponderous distance from Jupiter to Pluto.

Is it a willfully and near-recklessly devised design, particularly for thrusting hugely delayed gratification on a generation of players accustomed to instant/constant feedback and reward? Absolutely, and that's exactly what makes it one of the year's best.

Plants Vs. Zombies [PopCap, PC/Mac]

It would be easy, and cynical -- and more importantly, wrong -- to assume that casual powerhouse PopCap simply rode the crest of tower-defense and zombie-lust that defined much of gaming in 2009. Instead, it appears to have brilliantly anticipated it, having started and been in production nearly two years ahead, and could be instead seen as instrumental in propelling both memes into wider consciousness.

Going viral by nature of its basic premise alone, and then again by Laura Shigihara's perfectly ludicrous music video, it would have been disastrous if the resulting game couldn't fulfill expectations. Thankfully, it did, giving the tower defense genre a much-needed shot in the arm of accessibility without uprooting the core entirely, and the imminent move to iPhone -- letting us finally take the game away from our desktops -- is still one of our most anticipated.

Retro Game Challenge [Namco, DS]

Publisher XSEED had an unenviable task on their hands in bringing Retro Game Challenge to the West: taking a game that's inextricably derived from Japan's best games-related TV show that the rest of the world has never seen (Game Center CX), and is soaked through with references to Famicom nostalgia rather than the U.S.'s own NES nostalgia, and somehow making it relevant to us.

So we'll forgive them in going a half-step too far in shoe-horning in the 80s of Max Headroom and Valley Girl, and for working in 90s era U.S. game magazine references that flew over the heads of all but about ten people outside journalist-circles, because in the end none of that really mattered.

Well, the nostalgia does, because that's precisely what Retro Game Challenge is a game about: that once-every-three-months-a-new-game past of our collective youth, that afterschool poring over cheat codes past, a time when developers were inventing genres as often as games themselves.

Challenge is at heart a collection of remade early-days NES classics that never were, and your task (as goes the title) is to work your way through a series of prescribed challenges in each, whether it be finding hidden warps or defeating RPG bosses, and it manages to perfectly evoke that nostalgia that we thought only emulators could manage to do these days.

The sad news is that even as one of the year's most original and rewarding games -- a game that overtly celebrated the games culture that made up its target audience -- sales don't seem to have been up to snuff for the publisher to consider Westernizing the Japanese sequel, leaving a whole other legacy of first-gen Game Boy and 16-bit era "classics" behind.

Rhythm Heaven [Nintendo, DS]

Rhythm Heaven probably won't be showing up on near as many 2009 lists as it should, not because it's not brilliant -- it is -- but because it took so long for Nintendo to finally bring it to the West that it feels like ancient history (in digital years, obviously) to its core supporters who had imported and impotently raved about it long before.

Heaven's the truest example of a music game that's purely about rhythm, and not just about Simon Says-ing patterns or following bars down your screen to the tune of your dad's favorite classic rock. It's about rhythm as an unbroken line, or (at its best) an unbroken agreement between performers, about teaching and keeping steady tempo.

It's also one of the year's funniest, and desperately deserves some December love, if nothing else than to prove to Nintendo that a game this non-traditional can still find a wide, appreciative audience.

Rock Band: Unplugged [Harmonix/Backbone, PSP]

Though clearly overshadowed by its big console brothers and their new friends The Beatles, Unplugged -- and to a slightly lesser degree the DS version of Lego Rock Band -- were semi-shoutouts to the fans that made developer Harmonix the stadium-supergroup headliners they are today.

Take away its hard rock 'performance' and replace it with looping techno rave-up ambiance and you're right back where the developer began: flipping back and forth through lanes of sound, trying to keep each alive in sequence to make the parts a whole song, just as they pioneered in their PS2 originals Frequency and Amplitude.

You didn't need to know this, and you don't need to care, for Unplugged to work its magic: you just need the willingness to escape into music without the fake plastic mediator in between.

Recent news that Harmonix would no longer be converting its massive library of original recordings for Unplugged DLC stung fractionally harder than the bait and switch of offering only a five-song Lite version as the PSPGo's pack-in, with still no full download available on the PlayStation Network (which has to be down to digital publishing rights for particular bands and not willful neglect, right?), but for those still clinging to Sony's UMD-laden past, this is one of the UMDs most worth clinging to.

Scribblenauts [5TH Cell, DS]

Alongside Plants Vs. Zombies, Scribblenauts was the game that carried itself best throughout the year on a tidal wave of viral acclaim solely for its premise alone. But what a premise that was: it promised to let players conjure essentially any object imaginable -- krakens, keyboard cats, Gods, time-traveling robot-zombie-smashing T-rexes -- to solve puzzles via the furthest-most outer-reaches of our imaginations.

Did it work? Errr... yeah, I mean, mostly: developer 5TH Cell will be (and overtly has been) the first to acknowledge that its very touchy touch-based controls could have used some refinement. But even more surprising (for me, anyway), was in just how limited my own imagination was when it came time to put it to the test.

Need to rescue a cat off a roof, or wave away an angry bee? Much to my disappointment, I found I was just as apt to use, you know, a ladder and a bit of bug repellent, rather than any flights of fantastical fancy.

But its essential magic -- even if that 'magic' was simply the fortitude to sprite-sketch their way through untold reams of dictionary entries -- remained untouched, and it's still a thrill to try and stump the system and learn that they've got you covered.

Shadow Complex [Chair, Xbox 360]

Shadow Complex was the best retro revival this year that had no predecessor of its own. For once, it wasn't lazy to give the game the comparative nod back to Super Metroid: it was unabashedly right there in front of you, in its color coded barriers, in lead character Jason Flemming's tight crawls through narrow passages (here just crouched, rather than rolled into a morph ball), straight down to a 'Justin Bailey' referencing achievement.

And yet even the ones most prone to cry foul -- to call the game out for taking some of Japan's best classic design and running it through a Western mill until its plot and characters were offenders of the worst nameless, faceless, bottom-shelf would-be Tom Clancy degree -- had to admit: fair enough to that, but the game turned out completely wicked.

Harnessing the full power of Epic's Unreal Engine 3 for charmingly/ironically yester-year ends, this was exactly where we thought our 16-bit games were headed at the time: recycled but beloved design with drastically improved fidelity. We were wrong then, of course, but Shadow Complex proved maybe we shouldn't have been.

Uncharted 2 [Naughty Dog, PS3]

My pithy one-liner to encapsulate Naughty Dog's blockbuster adventure? It's the finest rollercoaster of the year that makes you climb off the train and rebuild the engine at the bottom of every hill.

Uncharted 2 easily managed to outshine the rest of the year's big-budget bids and managed to make a true believer even out of me, even if what it did best -- giving you some of the most hyper-vivid, lush and gargantuan ancient ruins and relics any developer has offered to let you explore -- was punctuated by over-technical firefights with your constant trigger-happy pursuers.

That's not to say the shootouts didn't work well on their own -- they are, probably, some of gaming's most realistically modeled, with every unwilling and amateur participant pressed firm against or dancing between cover and skittishly hazarding the occasional shot -- but the frequent breaks to dispatch another round of guards felt at times at odds against the relentlessly cinematic flow of the exploration.

In the end, you pressed through, though -- you had to -- guided by the promise of an even greater cliff-hanging thrill than the one you just narrowly scraped through, and the game never left that promise unfulfilled. Just next time, please, Naughty Dog: less of the shoot-shoot-bang-bang and more of the clamber-climb-marvel-amaze.




Stéphane Massa-Bidal (AKA Rétrofuturs (Hulk4598)) has created a set of posters depicting various popular web services as though they were vintage paperback covers. The set is absolutely beautiful, and is for sale in various sizes.

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The YouTube video "3000 Toothpicks In My Hair (new hair style)" is a response to "2222 Toothpicks in my Beard," and a bit more noodling around yields even more like this. I am both be-creeped and delighted. (thanks, Antinous!)

Not a rerun today. Just some rambling... lucky you!

I've been thinking about "following your bliss" a lot lately.

Last night I got down on the carpeted floor, next to my dog, and moved in for a little doggy cuddle like only she can give. Here is Stormy - totally cuddly worthy, don't you think?



As I cuddled with her, I thought about how all she does is follow her bliss. And we help her do that. She loves to go on walks, so we take her. She loves her treats, so we give her one after going outside and doing her business, especially when it's 15 degrees outside! We want her to be happy. Of course we do, we love her!

And then I thought, maybe, if I were to follow my bliss, I would get help too. Because He loves me, and wants me to be happy.

I found this post by Wayne Dyer on following your bliss. For now, I'm imagining what my blissful life would look like, just as he tells his son to imagine a blissful life making a living out of surfing.

Imagine...
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So is everyone sick of hearing about my TIW revisions yet?

I was emailing with Jackie Kessler last night, and I realised that part of what's taking me so long is that I feel like bitesized chunks of an hour here and there just aren't enough to get through my editorial letter. This is pretty intense work, and I need to concentrate and hold the structure of the book in my head as I shift events around - and then deal with the fallout. It's easy enough to move a few chapters and take out a subplot here, a character there... but making sure everything still makes sense afterwards? Not so much. Of course, none of it is 'easy' really; I just mean that cutting material or adding new scenes is reasonably straightforward. It's when you have to fit everything back together again that I start to panic. It's like my novel has become Frankenstein's monster, with pieces spread out all over the operating table. I just hope I don't need a 'User Manual' to bring it back to life, because if I do I'm in BIG trouble. ;)

What makes me very happy (and relieved!) though, is knowing that I have more than two weeks off from the Day Job over the holiday period. I've figured out that I will have 10 days to dedicate to my revisions - once I've done the family things and taken time out to visit [info]triciasullivan for a couple of nights. And then, of course, there's my goddaughter's christening at the beginning of January. *beams with pride*

But still... despite all of that, ten whole days - from 20th December - to work on THE IRON WITCH. I am aiming to have the bulk of the revisions dealt with by 6th January 2010. Yay!

That means I'll have about a week after that to write my anthology story. Um... Yay? O.o

*thud*

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Today, a short original poem written using the fibonacci form (dubbed the "Fib" by Greg Pincus, who has written quite a bit in and about that particular form). It was one of five that I wrote as part of a weekly writing challenge assigned to me by Angela DeGroot a few weeks back. I'm sure most cat owners will find the topic familiar.


Hair Ball
by Kelly R. Fineman

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heaves:
hair ball.
Hork hork hork.
What a squicky noise.
Cleanup needed in upstairs hall!


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I posted this picture on my Twitter yesterday. But I just love it.

A lot of authors (or someone on their behalf) blog as their characters - which gives readers the chance to interact with them. Here are some examples:
http://maximumride.blogspot.com/
http://www.kikistrike.com/ (Click on diary)
http://www.hilarymckay.co.uk/rose.php

And someone tweets as Laura Ingalls Wilder"
http://twitter.com/halfpintingalls (not totally related, but fun)

Can you think of more?



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Playing Memoir'44 with Jeff

What I found: The idea of war wasn’t glamorized or made trivial by the game. Instead, it made me better appreciate the bravery of those who fought in the war as well as the strategic insight (of lack thereof) of those who were in charge.

Posted in BoardGameGeek.com:
Overview of my first wargaming experience, with photos.

Mirrored from Debbie's Blatherings.

Although it took the FedEx man ages to find the studio, he just arrived with my copy!



The LiveJournal staff spent ages asking around,trawling through blog posts and getting in touch with people to put together this snapshot of what's been going on in our blogging community. And here's what they picked from my stuff! (Do you remember [info]davario's Draw Yourself as a Teenager meme? This was my original post.)



I recognised one of the contributors straight away, one of my favourite upcoming comic creators, Lucy Knisley or [info]lucylou and I thought [info]whodunnknit would like this little jumper, half Deadlyknitshade, half Beano:
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Here's the official LJ page for the book: [info]lj_turns10 and you can buy it here on Blurb.

Right now I'm try to come up with front and back covers for the Vern and Lettuce edition of the DFC Library. So far, Neill Cameron of Mobot High has suggested: Vern and Lettuce dressed as a Mariachi band, eating chow mein, with mole ballerinas pirouetting in the background. Or cloned zombie pirate Vern & Lettuce. From SPACE!

Jamie Smart says: vern and lettuce riding vern and lettuce robots like in bill and ted #pleaseohpleaseohgodplease

John Aggs jumped in with: Then when it all gets too complicated, you make a new universe! Ultimate V&L!

And [info]cdave says: A tuba! And the bottom third being a cut away showing moles in earth and and a the tips of a foxes ears on a tube platform. and gives this link to a great photo of a fox on the London Underground. (See what I'm doing, I'm taking Twitter back to LiveJournal, heh heh.)

Any new suggestions very welcome, I'm curious what people would want to see on the covers!

I’m so excited to finally share the giggletastic podcast I did with Maria and Deirdre at Mt. Kisco Public Library. I had so much fun talking with them about Shadowed Summer, library ghosts, library newts, Byron and Black Eyed Peas songs. No, really! Come check it out!

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I’ve been lucky enough to read this as the author has written it, and it’s totally blown my mind. It’s like nothing I’d ever read before, and it taught me a new thing: I can too like dark horror literature—if it’s brilliantly written, with compelling characters.

A Book of Tongues, from ChiZine Publications, is brilliantly written, with compelling characters.

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Hunger Mountain, Vermont College's literary magazine is auctioning off critiques and other things. This auction runs until Saturday.
[info]carriejones offers a full novel critique. Tim Wynne-Jones, An Na, other authors, editors and agents also offer critiques.

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I've been doing research this week for my next novel. I enjoy this stage of wide-open, crazy-haired possibilities--all those million "maybes" and "what ifs."

It's a humbling place, too, because I start to see the real people who live the lives of my characters. It's always deeper and more complicated than I first dreamed. To look at something a second time is to look closer and see different things.

It's never the official websites or the carefully-told, big moments I read or hear about that punch me hardest--it's the little, personal ones. Those are like a keyhole to another place. A boy who dances in the kitchen when he thinks no one's watching. A woman who has such a hard time wanting to get dressed every morning that she sleeps in her next-day clothes so she doesn't have to make that choice. When I read things like that I have to pause and stare out the window awhile and feel those moments, not just read about them.

When I finish a novel, I'm changed by it.

I already see that ahead.
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What made McDonald's the top fast food chain anyways?


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What, you're back again?

I was sure visiting all those restaurants last time would have kept you satisfied for at least two days, what with dinosaurs, a wild menagerie of zoo animals, Chinese take-out, greasy bugs, sprinkly seaweed and a mountain of cherry pies.

*looks at you and recognizes lean, hungry look*

Well, I can't really blame you, because we seem to have the same habit: we like to eat every day. No problemo. I'm happy to take you on another restaurant tour. Hope you're in the mood for more Chinese, some burgers, wild tigers, a troublesome bee, and a stampede of oinkers. Oh, and you have to mind your table manners.

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On November 14th, 1984, astronaut Dale Gardner used a Manned Maneuvering Unit to travel, untethered, from the Space Shuttle to the Westar 6 satellite. And caught it. And serviced it. And came home, safe and sound.

Astronaut Dale Gardner using MMU to travel to Westar VI satellite (via Fogonazos)



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Sid Jacobson and Ernie Colon (the pair who produced the bestselling graphic adaptation of the 9-11 Commission Report) have a new book out: Che: A Graphic Biography.

In addition to narrating the remarkable story of Guevara's life, Che is a very good backgrounder on the geopolitics that gave rise to Guevara's pan-Americanism, the Cuban revolution, and his tragic and brutal execution (the press that published Che, Hill & Wang, were last mentioned here for their graphic biography of Leon Trotsky).

The graphic format is especially well-suited to these geopolitical sequences, in which multi-page spreads are used to connect the dots between historical events and nations to give a compact but extremely informative tour through the complex story of Latin American colonization and independence as well as the Cold War.

This background also sets the stage for the complex story of Che, the man; and Che, the symbol. Both are fraught -- Che, the man, was fierce, brilliant, flawed, vicious, and compassionate. As a symbol, Che has become a revolutionary icon devoid of any substance, for sale on mugs and t-shirts (a warped mirror of Guevara's veneration in Cuba itself, where his larger-than-life image has likewise become an ideological icon).

As with every biography, the biographers have had to take sides, and, by and large, they side with Che. They don't whitewash his actions in war, or the disastrous blunders in Africa; but they also give just appreciation to Guevara's bravery, his commitment to justice, and his integrity.

The contemporary popular narrative of Che has two grossly oversimplified sides: sneering neocons who dismiss him as a butcher or a fool and denigrate those who sport Che badges as naive kids; and the worshipful reification of Che as a kind of revolutionary saint who could do no wrong.

The reality is subtler and more important than either position has it. The colonial story is one of immense greed and profit-taking by rich countries at the expense of the poor; it's the story of corruption and brutal repression, and it's the story of revolutions attempted, betrayed, and destroyed by internal and external forces. Guevara's life is a lens for understanding what colonialism does to its participants -- as Guevara says, "imperialism bestialises men."

Che: A Graphic Biography



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Photo: Daily Mail, LondonWhat does this picture make you think of? First, I'm astonished to see a hippo moving in an apparently fast manner! It would be like seeing certain relatives of mine get of the couch and sprint down the street--unimaginable.

Second, it makes me think, OK, what did this guy do? I know, I know. This could be a ferocious hippo and maybe the guy did nothing. But, honestly, this gives me that little

cheer I sometimes get when I see something vulnerable-looking get picked on, and then it strikes back. Ha!

Third, it reminds me of the time when I was a kid and there was an alligator in the yard of a house a few doors down. It had wandered a verrrry long block away from the lake. You just don't expect to see wild animals on a busy in street in an Orlando suburb!

Fourth, I love the way the man's feet are both off the ground. He's flying! I wonder what it must feel like to run that fast (preferably when NOT being chased by a wild animal)!

So, what does it make you think of? Take one of your answers to that question and write a quick 15 words or less poem. Have fun!
Click here for guidelines if you've never played before. The poem doesn't have to describe this image. Just use it as something to get your poetry brain working and see what comes out!

P.S. I see from a news story in the Daily Mail that this is a gamekeeper who was walking through a national park in Uganda when the hippo stopped eating grass and gave chase (with a cameraman conveniently nearby?).
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(Excuse me, family business first) HAPPY BIRTHDAY, JESSICA!!

(Thank you.)

The nominees for the 2010 YALSA Award for Excellence in Nonfiction for Young Adults have been named and I am really excited for two friends, Deborah Heiligman (Charles and Emma) and Tanya Lee Stone (Almost Astronauts) whose books both made the list.Huzzah!

Revision Tip #10

I need to clarify yesterday's tip.

A Facebook Friend wrote in to say my advice contradicted what Barry Lyga wrote on his blog.

(I'll wait while you hop over to Barry's page and see what he wrote.)

(Really, it's OK. I just made tea. The fire is warm. Go on! Shoo!)

(....)

(Are you back yet?)

Barry and I agree more than we disagree. We are both striving for the balance between tight writing and clear writing. Neither one of us wants you to waste words and page space on dialog or description that don't move the story forward.

But I see opportunity to use what he calls "blocking" as a way to move the story forward. It's all in the details. There is no point to just throwing in descriptions of actions simply to avoid a page of dialog that bounces back and forth between two people. (For the record, my first drafts are often page after page of dialog.) The key is to find THE EXACT RIGHT ACTIONS that will help your characters show what's going on inside them in addition to telling.

This is where choosing the right setting for a scene helps.

I'll give you an example from CATALYST. There is an emotionally loaded scene in which the main character, 18-year-old Kate, is talking to her younger brother. The two of them have just come from a funeral for a small child who was a neighbor. The brother is pestering Kate for details about their mother's funeral, which happened when he was an infant.

In the scene, Kate is cleaning the kitchen. (Their father is the minister, they live next to the church, the congregation gathered at their house after the funeral for a meal.) She is wiping clean, sanitizing, scrubbing, putting things into boxes, sweeping up - all actions that really show what she is trying very hard to do with the memories and feelings about the death of her mother. In the climax of the scene, she puts the last container of food in the refrigerator and slams the door so hard that family photos and the drawings by the dead child all fall off the door of the fridge.

That dialog could have been set in many different places, but I deliberately chose the kitchen because of the opportunities it gave me to create subtext for Kate. Putting action into dialog sequences ensures you don't have talking heads on the page, and it allows you to give the reader more information than just the dialog alone, if you are wise about your choice of action and setting.

Does this make sense?

Questions? Thoughts?

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After taking a couple of days off during heavy rehearsals for my burlesque recital (the mindset of "Chin up! Arms out!" and "Gruesome ghost murder" don't mesh very well), I'm back to work. I also got my very last round of edits for The Witch's Alphabet so tomorrow I'll probably throw up a meter for that too, just to keep myself honest.

"The Curse of Four"


Things accomplished in fiction: Psychic crime scene investigation, Srs Character Development, more bad memories, throwing up in a planter urn, first inkling of just how bad the Big Bad really is
Things accomplished in real life: Danced. Danced some more. Went to the DMV. Prepping to go home for the holidays on Monday.

And I read some.

28. Megan Abbott, Queenpin

I found a cache of Megan Abbott books a few days ago while trolling shelves, and was drawn in by their outrageous, retro-pulp covers. (Yes Virginia, apparently I do judge books by their covers.) I couldn't decide between the three on the shelf so I bought them all. I'm so glad. This is the best noir I've read in a very long time (aside from the Criminal comics) and it's written by a woman, about women, in a way that doesn't betray the tenets of a noir story (and while I love noir, it's an overwhelmingly masculine genre that offers few niches for women other than whores, victims or long-suffering background partners.) The women here are none of those things. The nameless narrator and her mentor, a mob boss named Gloria Denton, get into bad trouble, get themselves out again, and slowly fall apart as the secret they share eats them alive. They are powerful, and flawed, and so goddamn vivid I actually had to set the book down a few times and take it all in. The language Abbott uses cuts like a razor. It's so close to perfect I can only tell all you fellow fans of the dark, the gritty and the lowdown to go read it. Right now.

Originally published at Caitlin Kittredge.

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